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Astoria Park Elementary School
Tallahassee, Florida
Program for gifted students
Spring 2003
The Cows Are Going to Paris Fall 2003 Mrs.
Sandy Beck, teacher
Class
Updates and News (Please
check this page weekly.)
- Class Schedule
- Wednesdays
- 1. Gifted and
Able Learners Class for 2nd - 3nd graders
- 8:45 11:00
a.m
- Students may
bring a nutritious snack.
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- 2. Gifted and
Able Learners Class for 4th - 5th graders
- 11:25 a.m.
1:40 p.m.
- Students need
to bring a bag lunch to school. We eat in our classroom .
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- January 31
Most students have completed
illustrating and writing their original stories. A few students
took home art materials to complete illustrations at home.
This week, Feburary 3rd, students
will have a "Publication Party" . . . enjoying refreshments
while they read aloud their stories. They will also fill out
self-evaluations and watch a video produced by the author and
illustrator of the Magic School Bus series in which they discuss
how they collaborate to write their books.
I will make copies of students'
stories so they will all have their own copies to take home next
week.
February 3rd will also be the
last week of this class. A new class and a new topic will begin
on February 10th.
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- December 15
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- Using the handout, Original
Book Project, Part 2 as a guide, students have been working
on the rough (first) drafts of their stories. Students have been
writing, reading aloud to the class, getting feedback, and revising.
Some groups (and their stories) are further along than others.
The hardest part for most was to create a plot that included
an interesting "problem" the characters needed to work
through. This had been a good learning experience.
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- Because this project is going
so slowly, I have extended this term until the end of January.
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- I am hoping that at least some
groups will be able to complete their rough draft this week.
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- I am requesting some help
from parents who have a computer and, possibly, a scanner at
home or at work:
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- 1. One student in each group
will take home their rough draft, type it on their home computer
(spell check and grammar check!), then e-mail it to me either
as an MS Word (PC or Mac) or Appleworks (Mac) attachment or within
the body of the e-mail. Please do not format it with fancy fonts,
bold or large size type. The formatting will only have to be
undone when we put it into book form. If your child still struggles
with typing, it's OK to help him or her with the typing.
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- 2. When we return from the holidays,
students will work on illustrations for their books. Again, I
am requesting volunteers who have scanners at home or at work
to please scan your children's illustrations, SAVE THEM AS JPG
FILES ONLY and either e-mail or put them on a CD (not a floppy
disk) and send it to me. Please save each picture to show both
your child's name and the picture's order in the story (i.e.
-- rachel1.jpg, rachel2.jpg, etc.).
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- IMPORTANT: If you send the scanned pictures as
attachments, please save them as either 72 or 100 dpi resolution
(not 300!). I am using a dial-up 56K modem at home, and if everyone
sends me huge, 1MB files, it would virtually shut down my e-mail!
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- 3. When I have your children's
text and pictures, students will use them to create their book
using PowerPoint. Each child will get a copy of their Powerpoint
story on a CD to take home.
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- I hope you all have a happy
holiday!
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- November 18
Students practiced "Showing"
rather than "Telling" writing, in which the writer
uses sensory details to create word pictures. They finished by
writing a sensory poem about Buddy, a black lab mix puppy I just
adopted from the Animal Shelter. The poem below is a collaborative
poem (from both classes) comprised of at least one line from
each student's poem. They chose their favorite lines to contribute
to the collaborative poem. I think their writing is incredibly
wonderful!!!
Next week, students will use
showing writing as they begin the rough draft of their books:
Original
Book Project, Part 2.
Buddy
He looks like a black brownie
with blue frosting,
a wiggely, sweet, dark chocolate candy bar,
a cloudy night with only the moon showing,
an old, furry grizzly bear in the New Hampshire woods,
a child's shadow peeled off and left in the street,
a walking black vampire bat,
the smoke of the Washington Pentagon in 2001.
He smells like damp playground
earth,
a golden Delicious apple,
a ripe, red, sweet and tasty cherry,
a chocolate dog,
a juicy cheeseburger sizzling on the grill,
the sticky, honey-flavored sap of an oak tree,
sweet baby socks at naptime.
He tastes like warm, juicy caramel,
a warm-blooded white chocolate chip cookie,
melted chocolate ice-cream at Coldstone,
tall pine trees growing in a dark, scary, cold forest,
the frothy foam on a steamy cup of hot chocolate,
the worst meal on Fear Factor,
like laughter and joy.
He sounds like a loud train whistle
on a railroad track beyond the lake,
a big, noisy crowd of adults dancing at a birthday party,
a wolf howling at the full moon,
like the universe has stopped and everyone is silent and at peace,
like whispers in the darkness,
and space air on the moon.
He feels like a fur ball, black
and tiny,
a warm, cushy blanket on a cold winter night,
the soft, woolen blanket on my mother's king-size bed,
the smooth, soft silks of Asia,
a monarch butterfly's wings, and
like infinite love.
- November 11
- Students and parents enjoyed
the trip to the FSU Museum of Fine Arts! They learned about artist
Trevor Bell and abstract painting. They also wrote poetry that
was inspired by one of the paintings in the exhibit.
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- Students are now working on
the rough draft of their stories. Please see the on-line worksheet,
Original
Book Project, Part 2.
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- October 14
- Students worked together to
create a graphic organizer (AKA "cluster" or "map")
of the story, "The Cows Are Going to Paris." Then they
met with their groups to continue gathering background information
for their own stories: natural history facts on their animal
and information on the city their animal will visit. When they
have enough background information, groups will work on a graphic
organizer for their story. The project checklist, Original
Book Project, Part I, is also on-line so they can continue
working on their project at home. At the bottom of the checklist
are links to great resources on the Internet.
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- We have only one computer in
our classroom, so it is probably necessary for students to use
their home or a public library computer to do research. Only
fourth and fifth grade students get to work in the Computer Lab
-- and for only 30 minutes -- because the Computer Lab is "booked
up" the rest of the day.
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- If your child didn't bring his/her
field trip money last Tuesday, please send it this week (please
see "Oct. 7th update). We could use one or two more chaperones.
Thanks!
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- * Birdsong
Nature Center will have their annual Fall Open House next
Sunday, October 26th. I will be there with all the St.
Francis Wildlife animals.
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- October 7
- Students met and learned about
an eastern box turtle. Students met with their groups and continued
working on their book project. The project checklist , Original
Book Project, Part I, is also on-line so they can continue
working on their project at home. At the bottom of the checklist
are links to great resources on the Internet. I've asked students
to try to complete the Character and Setting portions for next
week so they can begin working on the plot. Several students
exchanged phone numbers with other students in their group so
they could collaborate at home. The 4th - 5th grade class spent
some time in the computer lab researching information for their
setting.
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- * Field
Trip:
- On Tuesday, November 4th, I
will take both classes on a field trip to the FSU Museum of Fine
Arts. The exhibit is "Trevor Bell: A British Painter in
America." Students will have a guided tour then choose the
artwork which they like/inspires them the most and write a poem
about it. All students will need to bring a bag lunch to school
that day and leave it at school. We will all eat lunch together
when we return from the trip.
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- I will need to collect money
for the school bus. Please send a check for $2.00, made payable
to Astoria Park Elementary School, or $2.00 cash with your child
next Tuesday.
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- We will leave at 9:15 a.m. and
return at 12:30 p.m. We need several parent charperones! If you
can chaperone, please send me an e-mail
or call Atoria Park and ask the to leave a message in my mailbox.
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- September 30
- Students continued researching
and began to work on the handout "Original
Book Project, Part 1." Students can also work on this
at home.
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- September 23
- As practice for creating their
own characters, students listened to a story, Sophie's Masterpiece,
then envisioned the main character and wrote about her and drew
pictures of her.
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- September 16
- Students continued researching
wild animals for characters in their books. 4th and 5th grade
students also went to the media center to research cities for
the settings of their books. Next class: "Developing a character."
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- September 9
- I was stung by yellow-jackets
and developed a severe allergic reaction. Therefore, I was unable
to hold classes this week.
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- If they choose to, students
can continue to work on their project at home or in the public
library by finding, reading and printing (from Internet) or checking
out (books) and taking notes on some more interesting information
on a wild animal that they would like to be the main character
of their book. If they do this, please have them take the information
to school next Tuesday.
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- Students will have the option
of choosing to work on this project alone or in a small group
of two or three. Students who choose to work in a group, will
form their own group based on similar interests and personal
expertise (one student might be the illustrator and another the
primary writer, etc.).
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- We have not begun learning about
/working on story elements yet . . . character development, plot,
setting, etc.
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- Thank you for your help!
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- September 2
- Students spent time in class
and in the Media Center researching wildlife for their books.
They also met and learned about a permanently disabled screech
owl from the St.
Francis Wildlife Association.
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- August 26
- After introducations and learning
about the class, students looked through Zoobook magazines
and books about wildlife to begin a list of 10 wild animals that
they might be interested in studying and using as characters
in their books.
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- Next week, students will complete
this list, begin their research, then share their findings.
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- * If you have not already
done so, please complete and send the Internet
Access (and photo) permission form to our class next Wednesday.
ALL students need this.
Cows Are Going to Paris class
Wildclassroom.net
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